Master the IELTS Band 8+ level with smart practice, clear strategy, and AI-guided study support.
By Abreez IELTS Team · April 2026 · \~15 min read
If you’ve ever wondered why two essays with similar grammar and vocabulary get very different IELTS scores, the answer is usually cohesion — the invisible glue that makes ideas flow naturally. Band 8 writers don’t just use “furthermore” and “however”. They master lexical chains, vary linking devices intelligently, and signal logical relationships with precision.
Coherence & Cohesion and Lexical Resource together make up 50% of your Writing score. Mastering advanced linking is one of the fastest ways to push your score from Band 6.5/7 to Band 8.
Linking words (discourse markers) show the logical relationship between ideas. They fall into different grammatical categories:
| Category | Examples | Use |
|---|---|---|
| Conjunctive adverbs | Furthermore, Nevertheless, Consequently | Between sentences |
| Subordinating conjunctions | Although, Whereas, Provided that | Within sentences |
| Prepositional phrases | In contrast to, As a result of | Formal writing |
| Reference | This trend, Such policies, The former | Avoid repetition |
Starting every sentence with Firstly, Secondly, Furthermore, In conclusion… looks mechanical. Examiners penalise overuse of cohesive devices. Band 8 writers use them sparingly and with variety.
| Device | Type | Example |
|---|---|---|
| However | Direct contrast | However, the evidence shows… |
| Although / While | Concession | Although renewable energy is expensive… |
| That said | Soft concession | That said, critics argue… |
| Notwithstanding | Formal | Notwithstanding these benefits… |
The rapid urbanisation of developing nations has placed enormous strain on infrastructure. As a consequence, governments are forced to redirect funds toward roads and sanitation. This reallocation, in turn, gives rise to underfunding in education and healthcare.
A lexical chain is a series of semantically related words that create cohesion without relying only on linking words.
Task: Some people believe that advances in technology will inevitably lead to mass unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction
Technological advancement has always caused economic anxiety, and the rise of sophisticated automation is no exception. While fears of machine-driven displacement are understandable, the claim that this digital transformation will inevitably cause mass unemployment is overly simplistic.
Body 1
Admittedly, certain jobs are highly vulnerable. Routine cognitive and manual tasks are increasingly being performed by algorithmic systems. What is more, this trend is accelerating rapidly. Consequently, many middle-skill workers face a difficult transition.
Body 2
That said, history shows that technological disruption eventually creates new opportunities, provided that societies adapt through education and reskilling.
Conclusion
Taken together, these considerations suggest that mass unemployment is possible but far from inevitable. The key lies in proactive policy and human adaptability.
• Avoid repeating the same linking word more than twice in an essay.
• Build lexical chains of 5–7 related terms for each major topic.
• Use reference words (this, such, the former) effectively.
• Vary your cohesive devices across different grammatical categories.
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